when doing these basic exercises, i would say...just keep the story really really simple and short. and then concentrate on getting the physics and principles right. at this point, that should be your goal.
i agree with shiva. U need should keep the story very simple. And mainly wat matters is how do u tell a story.My main crit on this shot is towards timing. There s no punch ne where. Its too plain. U need to build it, so tht audience can enjoy. Work on timing. Plan out how u wanna lead ur audience to the ultimate goal. good goin
And shiva can u just mail me ur email address. Will send u the invite
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ReplyDeletewhen doing these basic exercises, i would say...just keep the story really really simple and short. and then concentrate on getting the physics and principles right. at this point, that should be your goal.
ReplyDeletei agree with shiva. U need should keep the story very simple. And mainly wat matters is how do u tell a story.My main crit on this shot is towards timing. There s no punch ne where. Its too plain. U need to build it, so tht audience can enjoy. Work on timing. Plan out how u wanna lead ur audience to the ultimate goal. good goin
ReplyDeleteAnd shiva can u just mail me ur email address. Will send u the invite
k thx fr the crit!
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