hey myke. good effort. Animating a dialogue with ballman is really hard. Really appreciate the work. I ve a few suggestions . This particular dialogue is more of accent orriented. U need a story for it to understand, Atleast a situation. So wat u can do is, instead if delivering the dialogue in front of the screen, use the space in the screen and animate. Tht ill give u much better effect. More like he s pissed of or howling at someone. Let him walk a lil bit towards the secondary char and deliver the diag. Hope u gettin it. May be ther s a door and peter is inside it and he s howling at the door. Tht would add a gr8 contrast. Lemme know if ur gettin it.
love the body language!!! it's a challenge to make a character without hands or face act convincingly... and u excelled at it..! keep at it senior!! ;)
@ Vinay: yea I do get it.. my first idea was to have the shot from a slight top view through a window where peter is hiding behind the wall with the window on the right.. but had no time bro :(
hey myke. good effort. Animating a dialogue with ballman is really hard. Really appreciate the work. I ve a few suggestions . This particular dialogue is more of accent orriented. U need a story for it to understand, Atleast a situation. So wat u can do is, instead if delivering the dialogue in front of the screen, use the space in the screen and animate. Tht ill give u much better effect. More like he s pissed of or howling at someone. Let him walk a lil bit towards the secondary char and deliver the diag. Hope u gettin it. May be ther s a door and peter is inside it and he s howling at the door. Tht would add a gr8 contrast. Lemme know if ur gettin it.
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vinay
love the body language!!! it's a challenge to make a character without hands or face act convincingly... and u excelled at it..! keep at it senior!! ;)
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ReplyDeleteyea I do get it..
my first idea was to have the shot from a slight top view through a window where peter is hiding behind the wall with the window on the right..
but had no time bro :(
thanks tho..
will work on the BG wen time permits
@ Dapoon:
Thanks a ton man! ;)