Hey vinod. Liked the idea. nice build up. You have to work on pacing. Right now its pose to pose . Its more like u are building it up and taking it down or every action. U need to keep that tension in him. He should be more excited towards the last and when they loose the match or miss a goal, then show the extreme gear change. Keep goin:)
so u broke the symmetry... arent the poses looking better now?? and good thing u took out that going up and up thing. looked too methodical.
however as for the animation, i completely agree wid vinay... rite now he seems more of a robot with those poses programmed in him!!! not looking natural. u gotta break it up... make some parts delay, make some parts go faster, u know what i mean??
nothing stays still or stops mechanically at ONE pose, esp in such actions. so u gotta work on that.
as far as the dance is concerned, the poses look good, but the animation is where u need to work on more! the fluidity is missing. and do add in an antic (a big one) before the whistle.
i really liked the falling down part. but it has to be a li'l faster.
tht's it from my side ol' pal! awesome work nonetheless. but corrections are on the way!! u did good, u definitely can do better!
Hey vinod. Liked the idea. nice build up. You have to work on pacing. Right now its pose to pose . Its more like u are building it up and taking it down or every action. U need to keep that tension in him. He should be more excited towards the last and when they loose the match or miss a goal, then show the extreme gear change. Keep goin:)
ReplyDeleteso u broke the symmetry... arent the poses looking better now?? and good thing u took out that going up and up thing. looked too methodical.
ReplyDeletehowever as for the animation, i completely agree wid vinay... rite now he seems more of a robot with those poses programmed in him!!! not looking natural. u gotta break it up... make some parts delay, make some parts go faster, u know what i mean??
nothing stays still or stops mechanically at ONE pose, esp in such actions. so u gotta work on that.
as far as the dance is concerned, the poses look good, but the animation is where u need to work on more! the fluidity is missing.
and do add in an antic (a big one) before the whistle.
i really liked the falling down part. but it has to be a li'l faster.
tht's it from my side ol' pal! awesome work nonetheless. but corrections are on the way!! u did good, u definitely can do better!
lets drink to that!! hic hic! :D