Thursday, November 20, 2008

jump WIP (blocking)

okay so i'm killing myself to do this, but i REALLY wanna try it out!! PRESENTING BEFORE YOU MONSTERS, THE JUMP!!! i'm done wid the blocking, with some parts opened!! it's 30 loooooong seconds!!! but then i still have a week left for submissions, so i might JUST be able to pull it off!!! fingers crossed!! ;D
do give in ur C&C..! thanks!

3 comments:

damncreative said...

hey dapooon. I always love your ideas bro. sweet stuff. Always makes me laugh:). A few suggestions to make the performance better. Make the walk more organic. Now its the same till he comes near the edge of the rock. even i used to do it,till i realized that its not about wat kinda walk u doin.Its about how the audience connects to it. Just keep it organic and vary it.and at the last dont use tht head gesture, Its cliche. Think what kinda character is he. According to that he should react. Every one gets frustrated.But each character reacts accordingly. Just keep that in mind. you ill see a lot of difference.And dont concentrate a lot on principles. It makes your look weak. Just think about the performance and the principles will fit into it. Its comin out good.If any thing lemme know

cheers

Dapoon said...

YOIZAAA!! thanks for liking it bro!! also thanks a ton for ur corrections! well abt the walk, yea quite a few people didnt like it... they all thought it was cliched! but i guess it's a li'l too late to change it! i hardly got time now! but as i keep workin on it, i'll try to put in the variations that u talked abt.

and as far as the last part is concerned, i'm sure u were referring to the part where he slaps his forehead. yep now that u mention it, it DOES look cliched! wonder how i NEVER thought abt that! maybe because towards the end i was blocking it in a hurry! i'll change it bro!

i really liked some of the points u mentioned..
"its not about wat kinda walk u doin.Its about how the audience connects to it."

"Just think about the performance and the principles will fit into it."

never thought abt these things! some inspiring vinayquotes!! thanks buddy! tu pathar hai! angrezi mein bole to, u ROCK!!!

Prasad said...

Looking great ! ...can't wait to see the polished version ...and i too agree with the point 'don't just concentrate on principles...' ...and this is more applicable to you ...i guess you have already mastered principles ...they will just happen ...