hey harish. Its goin good. Just tighten up everything. Now its all loose. u got to emphasize on the main accent.I liked the acting in the 1st part. But when he starts the line "miniature Buddha...", The acting is kinda weak.Dont u feel? 1st half is very natural, and the other is cliche . So just keep it natural. M not gonna talk ne thing technical, Cos u already know.
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Great Going
I Would Just like to give comment not criticize
this is when he starts telling "like A...." make him lead with his head,eyes or the R-hand
& take care of the L-hand Penetrating at the same keyframe & it looks dead for a while
hey harish. Its goin good. Just tighten up everything. Now its all loose. u got to emphasize on the main accent.I liked the acting in the 1st part. But when he starts the line "miniature Buddha...", The acting is kinda weak.Dont u feel? 1st half is very natural, and the other is cliche . So just keep it natural. M not gonna talk ne thing technical, Cos u already know.
Ne way great goin. Take it to 2nd pass. Lezzee.
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