Monday, April 28, 2008

weight shift W.I.P

its my pre final assignment...comments plz... :)

3 comments:

666 said...

nice ..i liked everything at the last part..but didn't get why he's taking hip up so much just after the foot tapping. it must be really really subtle i think. it looks like a pop there right now. reduce it and this is good for a showreel :)

Rodentthought said...

I have the following comments

1. I think when he taps his foot it looks like he is a little uncomfortable in taping the foot. May be try making him a bit comfortable.

2. Overall acting could be a little more exciting, right now i feel a kind of bored. Probally he can be a little enthusiastic atleast when he decides to go for the toy

3. There seems to be a few minor issues on the weight shift, which could be improved.

Overall good work keep trying dude :)

WhoAmI said...

Nice!

1. At 5 secs, have a moving hold before he actually decides to go towards the toy shop.
2. At 4 secs, when he is about to go towards the balloons, his left leg stretches as if it doesn't have life. Try and animate it so it looks controlled. It is stretching a bit more than it actually has to. Basically it looks computer generated.

I liked the first part where he taps his feet and the head movement is also nice!

Good going, all the best!