nice ..i liked everything at the last part..but didn't get why he's taking hip up so much just after the foot tapping. it must be really really subtle i think. it looks like a pop there right now. reduce it and this is good for a showreel :)
1. I think when he taps his foot it looks like he is a little uncomfortable in taping the foot. May be try making him a bit comfortable.
2. Overall acting could be a little more exciting, right now i feel a kind of bored. Probally he can be a little enthusiastic atleast when he decides to go for the toy
3. There seems to be a few minor issues on the weight shift, which could be improved.
1. At 5 secs, have a moving hold before he actually decides to go towards the toy shop. 2. At 4 secs, when he is about to go towards the balloons, his left leg stretches as if it doesn't have life. Try and animate it so it looks controlled. It is stretching a bit more than it actually has to. Basically it looks computer generated.
I liked the first part where he taps his feet and the head movement is also nice!
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nice ..i liked everything at the last part..but didn't get why he's taking hip up so much just after the foot tapping. it must be really really subtle i think. it looks like a pop there right now. reduce it and this is good for a showreel :)
I have the following comments
1. I think when he taps his foot it looks like he is a little uncomfortable in taping the foot. May be try making him a bit comfortable.
2. Overall acting could be a little more exciting, right now i feel a kind of bored. Probally he can be a little enthusiastic atleast when he decides to go for the toy
3. There seems to be a few minor issues on the weight shift, which could be improved.
Overall good work keep trying dude :)
Nice!
1. At 5 secs, have a moving hold before he actually decides to go towards the toy shop.
2. At 4 secs, when he is about to go towards the balloons, his left leg stretches as if it doesn't have life. Try and animate it so it looks controlled. It is stretching a bit more than it actually has to. Basically it looks computer generated.
I liked the first part where he taps his feet and the head movement is also nice!
Good going, all the best!
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