Friday, May 2, 2008

weight shift

Hey monsters!

well here's the weight shift i have been working on!




C&C please

3 comments:

Rodentthought said...

buuuhoooo


Well, i have a few comments

1. I am sorry, i am not getting this the story here. why is he getting angry in the end?
Try geting a nice acting here.

2. I feel you are missing a few antiq's at a few places.

3. Over all time looks very linear.

4. When he bends down it is too fast.

Overall looks good but not selling.
Keep trying dude i am sure you can :)

WhoAmI said...

Hi! Vedanth,

1. Story is not at all clear.
2. Work on overall timing.
3. Weight Shifts can be made more clear, should be subtle yet visible.
4. When he steps to the side on 8 secs, it looks weird, have him take a little smaller step.

Good going, keep it up!

Unsound said...

thanks fr the comments... will work on them...