when doing these basic exercises, i would say...just keep the story really really simple and short. and then concentrate on getting the physics and principles right. at this point, that should be your goal.
i agree with shiva. U need should keep the story very simple. And mainly wat matters is how do u tell a story.My main crit on this shot is towards timing. There s no punch ne where. Its too plain. U need to build it, so tht audience can enjoy. Work on timing. Plan out how u wanna lead ur audience to the ultimate goal. good goin
And shiva can u just mail me ur email address. Will send u the invite
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when doing these basic exercises, i would say...just keep the story really really simple and short. and then concentrate on getting the physics and principles right. at this point, that should be your goal.
i agree with shiva. U need should keep the story very simple. And mainly wat matters is how do u tell a story.My main crit on this shot is towards timing. There s no punch ne where. Its too plain. U need to build it, so tht audience can enjoy. Work on timing. Plan out how u wanna lead ur audience to the ultimate goal. good goin
And shiva can u just mail me ur email address. Will send u the invite
k thx fr the crit!
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