Saturday, March 13, 2010

Trust (WIP)

hey guyz,
              jus take a look at this. yet to do the lip sync, facial n a bit of fingers...! took a bit long time thou, as this is my first animation wid dialogue. Learnt a lot in this. N of course, enjoyed it a lot.
              So, i'l be waiting for ur c&c's...  oh yeah..! just imagine thr's a drink in the glass.. hehehehe

Thank u,

11 comments:

Kanishk said...

Hey Jeev..really like how this is coming out.One thing you could look into is just pulling the cam a bit more to the right if possible.Good luck!

Xylem said...

I agree wit Kanishk, I remember Dapoon also pointed that out 1ce. Try shifting the camera a lil to the right, I understand y u dnt wanna change d angle nymore, ;D but work on it. Why leave things tat people keep pointing at. Cheers. :)

Xylem said...

nd nice body language by d way. :)

Unsound said...

nice nice man... I just have a little issue with the hat covering up the eyebrows in the last part of the shot... but over all its cool...

hav fun animating :)

Prasad said...

Great one ...I liked the characterization ...nicely executed !

Deepak Arasu said...

"All IS WELL" i watched it :)
Ok the comments now

1. I would probably not make him look at the cigar before he could throw it or I would make him look at it initially for a long time (thinking) and then once he made up his mind he focuses on the rest of the dialog. This would also create a nice contrast.

2. I also feel that if you would reduce the actions a little more and just have that last intentional spill a bit slow would add strength to the character.

All the best :)

jEEvith said...

hey folks, thank u all for ur valuable comments..

kanix n bittu, .. i knw man, but i ve animated according to the camera in few places, so if i change the camera angle even a bit, everythin will get screwed.. lol..!.. but still i'l try to do somethin abt it..;)

*vedu,.. i'l see to that, thank u..

*prasad... thankx man..

*deeeepaaak... m really run outta time... but still try to work on them... thank u

once again thank u all...

cheeers..:)
enjoy maadi.

damncreative said...

hey buddy sorry for the late reply. its comin out pretty good. But i think u can push it way ahead. I didnt like the acting in the second half.U worked hard on building his character at the stat but its all in vain at he end. He just looses his character. Y do u wanna do a literal acting for the accents at the second half "one is me the other s not me". Come up with a different acting choice. Like he should become more self oriented. Like he just trusts himself and nobody. So he doesnt care about the other guy, he just brushes him off. You getting it?

aman bhanot said...

well done ,I like the attitude but the last part isn't happening,It like you must have acted out wd empty
mug ,it should be like he is throwing the liquid in out of that thenit will work

Deepak Verma said...

nice man waiting for lipsync over it...

Harish k said...

animation needs work...work on basics
cheers
Harish k