You should also try to take care of a couple of hich ups.....
Like, the flow of animation breaks when the character pauses inbetween. Makes it look a lil robotic. :)
And about the music, try ease it out slow when the dialogue starts, dont mute it...jst keep it to the level where the clarity of the voice is intact.
The Last Dialogue (The lady and the Old Man), work on the lighting, as in the contrast. It's looking a lil dull. Hey! y keep anything for them to complain about.
I just found that the reaction to missing the bus a bit (ahhhh how do u say) timid... if I'vd been waiting for a bus for soo long that I finished my puzzle i'vd be pissed like hell :)
jeevith, u said it urself, u made this in a hurry! :-/
i know ur situation, so going by that, that doesnt leave me much to say. just that, plz keep polishing the reel. all the pieces need polishing (the jump is the only piece that looked a li'l finished to me). they all look like they're in 1st or 2nd pass.
u have some really nice potential in ur reel, dont let it go waste by haste (hey that rhymed!! lol)!
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Hey !! Nice Demo Dude.
You should also try to take care of a couple of hich ups.....
Like, the flow of animation breaks when the character pauses inbetween. Makes it look a lil robotic. :)
And about the music, try ease it out slow when the dialogue starts, dont mute it...jst keep it to the level where the clarity of the voice is intact.
The Last Dialogue (The lady and the Old Man), work on the lighting, as in the contrast. It's looking a lil dull.
Hey! y keep anything for them to complain about.
Nice work buddy, keep it warm.
nice congrats on making a reel jeevit...
good luk...
I just found that the reaction to missing the bus a bit (ahhhh how do u say) timid... if I'vd been waiting for a bus for soo long that I finished my puzzle i'vd be pissed like hell :)
in any case good luck with the application :D
jeevith, u said it urself, u made this in a hurry! :-/
i know ur situation, so going by that, that doesnt leave me much to say. just that, plz keep polishing the reel. all the pieces need polishing (the jump is the only piece that looked a li'l finished to me). they all look like they're in 1st or 2nd pass.
u have some really nice potential in ur reel, dont let it go waste by haste (hey that rhymed!! lol)!
good luck!
needs lot of work...learn the basics right...
hmmm... thank u all guyz...
will look into it from next time...:)
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