wow this is seriously cool!! good going bro! one of the best weight lifting clips i've seen. i love the subtle things u've done with his actions... like, adjusting his belt in the beginning, and lifting his leg up to make it easier for him to hold the box. kinda gives a natural touch! waiting for the final trip! only critic from my side wud be his panting. it's a li'l late! it shud follow IMMEDIATELY after he keeps the box. and try exaggerating the panting! like he just falls over the box with fatigue! otherwise it's brilliant!!
hey bro, gr8 goin. really nice acting. like it. 1st half of the animation is goin gr8, but in the second half ur loosing the character .it looks robotic. make it more natural. focus on how he would place the box on to the truck. cool. keep it up
This is looking great buddy.. I like the way you are being brave in trying new actions.
I have 1 comment to add-on which would be that you are missing the pose where the settle of the box happens after he lifts it. Right now it looks like he is moving back directly for the settle which could be an action after the settle of him lifting the box.
Hey! Good work! Liked the acting part in the beginning. But, the weight of the box is lost while he lift it with his leg. Try being closer to the truck while lifting the weight and then quickly put it on the truck.
The first part works better compared to the second half. Second half still needs work in this stage itself.
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wow this is seriously cool!! good going bro! one of the best weight lifting clips i've seen. i love the subtle things u've done with his actions... like, adjusting his belt in the beginning, and lifting his leg up to make it easier for him to hold the box. kinda gives a natural touch! waiting for the final trip! only critic from my side wud be his panting. it's a li'l late! it shud follow IMMEDIATELY after he keeps the box. and try exaggerating the panting! like he just falls over the box with fatigue! otherwise it's brilliant!!
i totally agree with 'dapoon'... uve got some really nice poses in there!... good goin... looking forward to the progress...
hey bro, gr8 goin. really nice acting. like it. 1st half of the animation is goin gr8, but in the second half ur loosing the character .it looks robotic. make it more natural. focus on how he would place the box on to the truck. cool. keep it up
This is looking great buddy..
I like the way you are being brave in trying new actions.
I have 1 comment to add-on which would be that you are missing the pose where the settle of the box happens after he lifts it. Right now it looks like he is moving back directly for the settle which could be an action after the settle of him lifting the box.
over cool :)
dude u need to work on ur antic poses...
Its nt loooking heavy..????
How will ur audience will know this BOX is tooooo HEAVY...
GUD GOING..!!
Take Care
-MB
Hey! Good work! Liked the acting part in the beginning. But, the weight of the box is lost while he lift it with his leg. Try being closer to the truck while lifting the weight and then quickly put it on the truck.
The first part works better compared to the second half. Second half still needs work in this stage itself.
Great going!
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