Sunday, August 17, 2008

WIP - Dialog - Rough blocking

Hey partners,

This is my rough blocking on the dialog that i am currently working on right now.
I want him to be a psychic self obsessed scientist and i also wanted to establish his character strongly.
Please let me know what you guys think?

4 comments:

Unsound said...

hey deepak nice idea!!! i like the whole thing

just one thing! i dono about the pose when he says "my mind" it looks like he's searching for something :D

damncreative said...

Hey buddy. Its a very intricate diag. Kinda hard to get the right acting choice. Right now wat u have doesnt work. His acting choice doesnt go along with this diag. Think of some other acting which will give a clear idea about wat he s saying. And u have discussed the idea about tht bulb in his hand with me rite, If a new person looks at it, he ill not get it. And this diag has big accents , U gotto to catch tht to convey. Lemme knw

WhoAmI said...

hey deepak,

nice effort, but the acting you told me of earlier works better. now it kinda doesn't work very much. and the background also doesn't support him being a mad scientist.

one thing i really would appreciate is that you have managed to get your personality into the character or maybe it shows your personality, the way he moves forward towards screen is almost exactly the way you acted out. awesome thing!

anyways, try some more acting choices! will be a good one!

Rodentthought said...

Thanks a lot Vinay, Chandu and Vendanth. I will post the updated work as soon as i can.