Tuesday, September 9, 2008

Tennis


hiii guyss..i really need some comments on this plzz..i am still working on the timing part, taking it to 2pass.. ur C&C's to improve it ^_^ -Harish.k

6 comments:

pcavale said...

that's Andy Roddick's serve you have tried rite??!..it looks very similar!...your shot looks great man!
in quite a few places i think you are hitting hard spots...just watch out for that "jittery"ness.
Also would suggest going in for a slightly lower Field of View (FOV or AOV) value just so that there is a little more consistency in the screen space he occupies..(he neither is too far nor comes too close)
neat stuff! :)

-Prash

dapOOn said...

heyyyyy where's that 'pointing-to-god' pose in the end??!! lol

timing is much much better than the previous one dude! the shots are snappier and more aggressive! i felt it'd look even more awesome if u made him do a bit more cheering in the end! anyway keep working on it dude! coming out awesome!

Prasad said...

ya man this is looking good ! ...and looks like you have taken care of things mentioned during your w.i.p ...great !

Dam said...

Hey! Haris Its commimg out good ,But need lots of polish ,In the begining when the character walks ,put some weight shifts on the hips ,I mean side to side movement ,and check ur graph it looks little choppy,also see that U never keep ur feet while walk streight in front perpendicular to the axis of body (i mean the axis of feet are parallel to each other, dont do it ),I guess most of the time animation looks choppy ,check out ur graph ,And the slipping of the feet does not look conviencing ,and overall follow through in the upper body is missing thats the another reasone it looks choppy most of the time ,Gotta polish it lot........

damncreative said...

hey harish, looks neat. U definitely got to work on timing. the hits doesnt look natural. U got to get tht right amount of antic and force . And m not sure about the skidding part, looks cartoony. Make it more believable, Right now it looks like he s doin it on purpose, make him loose his balance and regain it. Tht ill give u a good result. And motion design wise, Dont make him jump and hit on the last shot. Looks weird. If u wanna make him jump then use a complete full fledge SMash. or else extend his arm and reach out for the ball, Tht ill add contrast in ya animation

cheers
vinay.

Harish k said...

Thanks!! guys...really helped me a lot..i have already done fixing some stuff...will work on it and show u all the update ^_^ Thanks again :) -Harish.k