Wednesday, January 6, 2010

Oldman Vs. Young

Hi! Monsters,

This was my entry for the 11 Sec Club, Dec 09 Contest. Please give me suggestions and comments to make it better as I want to put it on my reel.

http://www.vimeo.com/8567604

Thanks!

5 comments:

Unsound said...

hey chandu been a while since i last saw ur animation!!! its NICEeeeeeeee!!!! love the setup...

just couple of things ...

I feel he comes back too much after "Lose" and then again (like a pendulum)... I feel it might be better if it didnt go bak and front as much...

the second is that u could hit monster with a more dramatic pose...

nice to see ur work after a long time man...

ALL THE best for 11 sec club

dapOOn said...

yo chandu!! it's been eons since we all saw ur last animation man! so nice to see this! i too love the setup man. and i agree wid ved about the swinging back n forth movement of the young lawyer. infact as of now i love the old lawyer's acting, it's quite natural. compared to him, the new one looks like he's acting. he also comes across as stiff at times. i dunno how this will look in the subsequent passes but these are my thoughts now! good luck for the contest bro! bring home the bacon!! lol

whoami said...

I have a doubt about the camera. Should I have cuts, as the current angle is not showing both of their faces clearly. Should I zoom in more or whatever, please tell me guys!

kasana said...

Going good chandu. Sorry cudn't reply earlier.
On vimeo you mentioned tht experienced lawyer is angry but I am finding it here otherwise.Doesn't matter though.
Start & end is very abrupt.A lil anticipation in start would help us to ease into the shot.M sure you would not like to end the shot in middle of the action(provided there is no time constrains :) )
I loved the old lawyer's acting but not able to convince myself with acting choice when he says "you r a...monster." looking forced just chk if I am the only one.
And agree with dapun about stiffness...par abhi Dilli door hai..lets c how you gonna finish this already looking nice work.
Keep it up Chandu.

Huuuaaa !!!

whoami said...

thanks for the comments guys! I will work on it. as I have gone too far with the dialogue, it will be a tough job addressing the feedbacks, i will incorporate these in my next piece, will still work on this one too! from next time on, i will post from the blocking stage, so that it is easier to correct. Thanks a lot guys!