Friday, January 29, 2010

Pendulum exercise update 4!

Hello Monsters!

First of all i want to thank all of the monsters that did critiqued my previous animations exercises, thank you for your time.
This is the pendulum exercise "refurbish". I'm really waiting for your's great critiques.

Regards,
Andrei.

Pendulum exercise update 4! from Andrew Root on Vimeo.

4 comments:

Unsound said...

hey its coming out nice man...

just the overlap on the pendulum on antique are kinda stiff not as flowing as the rest of the shot what it needs is an S shape between two opposing C shapes. what i mean is that the top part moves in the direction on the top while the bottom is still moving in the old direction... this can be seen on 0:05-0:06 when the base finishes its antique and is going into LOOP DA LOOP, the tail quickly goes into the C shape...

for reference try tying eraser to a piece of string... its hard to make out but u'll see a slight 8 shape when u move from one direction to other...

this is a bit off but can i ask why you have 24 frames in the start where nothing is happening???


and when in the end splat, i dont think the tail would move like the way u have done... right now it looks like there's an invisible wall...

hope my comments makes sense... and have fun animating... its coming out nice... it just need few tweaks is all...

andrei said...

Thanks unsound.
-24 because i can see it better how it's start in vimeo.

Prasad said...

Yep, this is getting better ! You have already got some pointers, I can't point anything else ...great going !

andrei said...

Thank you Prasad!