Wednesday, January 23, 2008

Comments plz... :)

Hey guys...
My first post... Blogging.. "finally"...
I'm sure lot of people will be really happy with me today... ;)
Alright., this is not yet a finished work but i would like a few comments and tips from all the experts... :)




-supy

7 comments:

Rangesh said...

Good Going

Is The Ball In The audience Not yet done

kasana said...

Welcome.....so finally you also amongs the monsters.
Nice work. my major concern is Composition.
Extreme front and extreme back dead view.Second I'd choose light tone in foreground to give more attention in center.
In animation magician rotation is too much in air. I think you can cheat there and in last make him bow to audience.....

Prasad said...

hello there...fantastic job...really good work...what i feel is you are missing 'pauses' 'hold' or whatever you call it...in start when he bows..when he looks to one side and then to other you could have added a pause of few frames..similarly at the end when he finishes his trick and bows down you could have added pause...just what i feel..else loved the work...lot's of luck

whoami said...

Hi Supy! Nice start. The first time I saw it, I did'nt quite get the story. It was kind of a bit fast. So, try making it a bit clearer. For instance, it is not clear whether the box is calling the ball onstage or the ball is going on it own, and what the ball is doing to the box (going around it). And composition wise, I agree with Kasana, it looks flat from the dead front view. The hat looks nice, nice animation. Keep going and All The Best!

whoami said...

That was look wise, and animation wise I don't have much to say now, since it is a W.I.P. Let us see the next stage or finished work. All the best once again! Happy animating!

Unsound said...

hey nice! but a bit confusing! i donno if u intended this but theres a jerk in the hat just before it comes crashing down on the ball. a dynamic camera angle would have made more impact! overall i liked the concept of a bugging ball!
Keep it up and m waiting to see the final result!

damncreative said...

Hey supy. Gr8 start. But a few tips frm my side. 1st things 1st. STORY IS THE KING. I quite didnt get the story. 3 main reasons. The start , the middle and the end is not workin out. U got to time it out properly. Make it more clearer to the audience. And the reactions of the magicians could be better and even the other character should be more annoying. Just work on these. it ill be gr8. And this is ur 1st post. waoooooooooooooooooooooh................
.................... sorry had fainted. hehe. good. Welcome to monsters community. enjoy. happy animating

cheers