pretty good...at around one second his hand which comes down stops abruptly...you sway it little more...and there is some tremble in hand and head...have you added it on purpose the same way you have added it legs ?...it looks fine with leg's...but it kinda looks weird in head and hand...you may want to tweak the animation...but then it's WIP...you will polish it soon...this is just what i feel...i am just like you...if i am told to do same exercise i doubt how far i would go...so wait for some expert to correct you...lot's of luck....and keep animating...
thanks for the comments prasad.. :) ya i have reworked (decreased values) on the head and hand tremble while making an effort to hold the box.. i had added it on purpose.. need to tweak it more.. lots of luck to u too.. :)
it's just, at some places i felt a lil straight-aheadness. well, not a big deal. i wanted to know if this is organized. otherwise,there's no point in giving a big comment on a work that's close to the polish stage. if u went pose to pose, u can probably make adjustments..otherwise, it's tough.
i think u have to work a lil more on the moving holds. and the hand, prasad has mentioned.. in CG, we work on ones (hope u know about ones and twos of the 2D )..the problem with this is, if u stop something immediately without a slowin/slow out.it will feel like the pat is hitting and imaginary wall and stopping..that's not very nice to the viewer's eye. Take that hand for example..what u can do is..delay parts..drag the palm a little more so that it comes to the stop after the whole hand..just like a lil overlap...really liked the acting part..and the acting u put in at the beginning. trace ur arcs of the parts like, wrists, hips,shoulders ..there are a few lil jerky movements i can see ,fixing the arcs would probably remove it! carry on..give us the polished stuff to enjoy :)
hey buddy. comin out nice. pretty neat. A few suggestions. Try to get a subtle antic. It ill add flavour to it. right now he just comin and picking it up.And picking up part needs hell lot of work. ther is no weight at all. Loks like box is very light and he s acting as if its heavy. U need to get tht sense of weight. And even the part wher he keeps it on the table. Add over laps and all those stuff. !st think y does he wants to keep it on the table. Wat is the character thinking. These all things matter and this is wat changes your gestures. Ne way keep up the good work. Waiting to c the final
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pretty good...at around one second his hand which comes down stops abruptly...you sway it little more...and there is some tremble in hand and head...have you added it on purpose the same way you have added it legs ?...it looks fine with leg's...but it kinda looks weird in head and hand...you may want to tweak the animation...but then it's WIP...you will polish it soon...this is just what i feel...i am just like you...if i am told to do same exercise i doubt how far i would go...so wait for some expert to correct you...lot's of luck....and keep animating...
can i ask if u went straight ahead or pose to pose?:) before i say anything
thanks for the comments prasad.. :) ya i have reworked (decreased values) on the head and hand tremble while making an effort to hold the box.. i had added it on purpose.. need to tweak it more.. lots of luck to u too.. :)
hi 666.. i went pose to pose.. if i may know why.. thanks.. :)
it's just, at some places i felt a lil straight-aheadness. well, not a big deal. i wanted to know if this is organized. otherwise,there's no point in giving a big comment on a work that's close to the polish stage. if u went pose to pose, u can probably make adjustments..otherwise, it's tough.
i think u have to work a lil more on the moving holds. and the hand, prasad has mentioned.. in CG, we work on ones (hope u know about ones and twos of the 2D )..the problem with this is, if u stop something immediately without a slowin/slow out.it will feel like the pat is hitting and imaginary wall and stopping..that's not very nice to the viewer's eye. Take that hand for example..what u can do is..delay parts..drag the palm a little more so that it comes to the stop after the whole hand..just like a lil overlap...really liked the acting part..and the acting u put in at the beginning. trace ur arcs of the parts like, wrists, hips,shoulders ..there are a few lil jerky movements i can see ,fixing the arcs would probably remove it! carry on..give us the polished stuff to enjoy :)
hey buddy. comin out nice. pretty neat. A few suggestions. Try to get a subtle antic. It ill add flavour to it. right now he just comin and picking it up.And picking up part needs hell lot of work. ther is no weight at all. Loks like box is very light and he s acting as if its heavy. U need to get tht sense of weight. And even the part wher he keeps it on the table. Add over laps and all those stuff. !st think y does he wants to keep it on the table. Wat is the character thinking. These all things matter and this is wat changes your gestures. Ne way keep up the good work. Waiting to c the final
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