1. To me the animation looks good but i think from the appeal point of view the box needs to react with the guy pushing. I hope it is a refridgerator so it can very well move a bit when the guy pushes. What do ya think?
2. I am not really able to understand what happen at the start. i.e from F15 to F30. He touches the refridgerator and then moves his head up amd down which is kinda confusing?
Hey buddy. nice work. Some parts feels like its sticking . Doesn't ve that snappy feel. If ur trying snappy make sure it doesn't stick. Weight wise u got get it out more. Right now the overall energy is happening in intervals. U ve to constantly take up and then finally drop it down. Hope u got wat i meant. If ne thing. Just clarify . Cheers Its comin out awesome. Work on it
Animation is nice. The first finger touch thing is not clear. According to me, none of the pushes has got force in it. When he is taking the anticipation and coming and hitting the fridge, it looks like the entire force is being blocked by some invisible wall. Try and retain the poses for some more time where he is in contact with the fridge and the body is responding accordingly.
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1. To me the animation looks good but i think from the appeal point of view the box needs to react with the guy pushing. I hope it is a refridgerator so it can very well move a bit when the guy pushes. What do ya think?
2. I am not really able to understand what happen at the start. i.e from F15 to F30. He touches the refridgerator and then moves his head up amd down which is kinda confusing?
Rest all looks cool to me :)
Hey buddy. nice work. Some parts feels like its sticking . Doesn't ve that snappy feel. If ur trying snappy make sure it doesn't stick. Weight wise u got get it out more. Right now the overall energy is happening in intervals. U ve to constantly take up and then finally drop it down. Hope u got wat i meant. If ne thing. Just clarify . Cheers
Its comin out awesome. Work on it
Animation is nice. The first finger touch thing is not clear. According to me, none of the pushes has got force in it. When he is taking the anticipation and coming and hitting the fridge, it looks like the entire force is being blocked by some invisible wall. Try and retain the poses for some more time where he is in contact with the fridge and the body is responding accordingly.
By force, I mean the flow. He is taking a good anticipation, but that gets kind of blocked when he actually pushes the fridge.
what you need first and foremost is frame numbers. big and clear. :)
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