Friday, November 7, 2008

Hey guys i have done the rough blocking for gear change...Before moving further i want ur views on the concept is it working....???


2 comments:

dapOOn said...

yo buddy!! nice one dude!! reflects every cricket crazy fanatic!! well the story telling isnt bad, but it takes a second viewing to know what's REALLY going on! THAT shudnt happen. it has to be CRYSTAL CLEAR!!!

i really liked ur initial pose, it shows the tension on his face. also cuz u've broken the symmetry and posed him in a curve that doesnt lead the eye out of the screen, it's great as far as composition is concerned!

but after that, the poses are all symmetric. i wud suggest u to break the symmetry of the poses... cuz they really look monotonous.

as far as animation is concerned, it's pretty good, but i think u shud make him stand up on the couch as he lifts up his hands expecting a 6. i think that will show the excitement even more! then a few poses to build up the tension and then the fall, cuz the player is actually out (or whatever). rite now the actions are repeated. so it's not too interesting.

and as u go on to the next pass, do add in small li'l movements like tapping his feet or shaking his hands nervously. that'll add more character.

that's it from my side buddy! great job nonetheless!! lol

Vinodh A R said...

Thanks Daps...Ya will do the changes...As u mentioned the concept going linear means he goes up one after other was the same thing told by our classmates...Even u felt the same...

Thanks dude...