Friday, September 4, 2009

Stupid

4 comments:

Deepak Arasu said...

This is Deepak Here - Good one, But it lacks a lil force in the end. I would probably try closing his left hand or maybe show some closed force on the fingers. Keep working Comming out good

Prasad said...

Yep, I too noticed, what Deepak said is right. To give that impact or force appropriate for that particular dialog, make him stand. Making him sit had already taken out that force. Just a suggestion though.

I would recommend you to see Tim Oberlander's reel ...it has same dialog ...just for inspiration ...see how he animated ...lotsa luck !

damncreative said...

hey harjeet, good one. But it lacks a lot of things. First and foremost all the accents are hitting and it looks pose to pose. I dont feel the inner energy in the character. It just feels like he is just delivering the dialogue, I dont see the context or what kinda character he is. Try giving him a character and a better acting choice. Great goin

cheers

Reverent Green said...

yup. plus..open the mouth a lil more for words like ever..and open it more on the last 'ever' ..at the end, add some eye darts, it will add more strong emotion and threat he's trying to convey.. then tiny details like overlaps, extra unintentional movements and moving holds..look at the hand after hitting the table..it's dead there.. .. and yeah, lipsync is pretty off.. really needs some work,hitting the accents.