Thursday, October 8, 2009

Evil Inside!!!

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Hey Monsters,
Dis is my 11 sec dialogue which couldn't reach d competition due to sum goof up at their end or a mistake 4m my side, i really donno. Instead my blocking file got published, anyways here is d shot.....
Still have a few things in my mind to fix b4 putting it in my reel
C&C plz....
Thanx

5 comments:

Concept devil said...

really good attempt. the idea of alter ego was just great. i don't know if the cut is necessary..evenif it is, it looks kinda distracting .. talk to kasana about 'keeping continuity' with cuts.. he's better at that,i'm sure. and, did u rush through the last part of the scene? i mean, the animation seems a lil weightless while the girl comes out of the mirrors and waves hand.. tighten up things before u take it to the reel. it's all in the graph i'm sure..poses are fine.. timing :) play with it. good luck

Nikul Patel said...

Great attempt

keep it up

sabhya said...

Hey Roshan,
Thanx 4 ur valuable comment, i know i rushed into things n is clearly visible in my animation. Will work on d second half particularly n will tighten d timing overall
Thanx a lot

damncreative said...

Hey sabya nice idea. Liked some parts of it. But at the end i dont feel the punch as you had it at the beginning. And i see lots of cliche acting at the end. I guess you can punch it up a lot. Overall acting can be improved as there is lot of pause in the dialogue. That is my opinion. great going

cheers

Prasad said...

Nice concept ...and it's many degrees nicer that your blocking ...good luck !