Thursday, September 10, 2009

11 second club september entry WIP (storytelling poses)

hi guys looooooong time no posts!! well this is sumtin i've been trying to block for the 11 second club september entry. i'm a li'l lost here and there... esp in the gap between "missy" and "WHO DO U THINK...", the acting comes to a stop. cud u suggest me a li'l sumtin?

i hope the gag is clear! i'm planning to have his huge photograph in the frame hanging on the wall to make things obvious!

p.s. vinay and vedanth, thanks for ur suggestions pal, i'll definitely consider them.


sathya said...

Its nice !!! All the best :)

Prasad said...

This looks great ya ! ...i was just thinking how will it be if she says all this standing, making herself more intrusive and dominating to the 'person' in that chair ...i understand that she is probably trying to imitate her boss ...but just what i thought to add to the energy and all ...whatever you did is already great ...looking forward :)

Dapoon said...

thanks guys appreciate it!

@prasad, thanks for ur suggestion dude. it sounds nice.. but i'm doubtful if it'll work in THIS case. i want the girl to be completely incoherent that her boss is standing RIGHT there, which will be possible to achieve ONLY when she sits down and gets completely on with the dialogue. if she stands, i think she will easily be able to tell that there's someone else in the room. again, just my thoughts!

but thanks guys! i'll try and finish it off soon!