Tuesday, April 22, 2008

Dialogue W.I.P

Hi Monsters,

This is my dialogue assignment. Other than critics, I also need some idea for the payoff for the dialogue. Would help me a lot if you could suggest some. Some idea to end the dialogue. Please!

Thank you all.


KASANA said...

Its looking good Chandra.
I feel you can give some hold to hammer before hitting to show some power. And check shoulder in not

going up and tht why not leading the hands.
In last pose torso arc is weird as you knw shoulder arc will

be opposite to pelvis and head will slant against to shoulder. Very simple but common mistake....Feet is

very straight to camera...give some clear sillhoute.

Harish k said...

nice one!!

Harish k said...